The Loaves

we were learning about metaphrs A metaphrs compares 2 different things. in this poem the out

her used metaphor to compares bread to cloud

I found it easy to draw the pattens because my mum taught me how to draw 

I found it hard to do the metaphrs because I  I didn't know what it meant  

I really enjoyed draw the pattens because it was really cool and i enjoyed it

Next time I need to make it better